{"id":362,"date":"2021-06-26T12:18:08","date_gmt":"2021-06-26T12:18:08","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/metawareness.com\/?p=362"},"modified":"2021-07-10T08:05:48","modified_gmt":"2021-07-10T08:05:48","slug":"oscars-heart","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/metawareness.com\/?p=362","title":{"rendered":"Oscar&#8217;s heart"},"content":{"rendered":"\n<p>I am currently editing a story I wrote together with my friend for life <a href=\"http:\/\/www.humanwriting.com\/jkgarcia\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noreferrer noopener\">Jennifer K. Garcia<\/a>. The story is about a girl who is in a bad place going worse. The story evolves around an unexpected relationship that ends in a epic event.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Currently the story is start to end done, but the story line isn&#8217;t&#8230;entirely correct. It misses consistency and many of the scenes should be written into either more extensive detail or anachronisms need to be removed.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>I have looked at the scenes and they are also under consideration to be reordered.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>To give you a &#8216;teaser&#8217; of the story:<\/p>\n\n\n\n<blockquote class=\"wp-block-quote is-layout-flow wp-block-quote-is-layout-flow\"><p><strong>I noticed a change in posture. Like a moment ago when Ally didn&#8217;t respond to inquiries, she slowed her breathing, but deepened it with a sigh. Her facial expression changed.<\/strong><\/p><p>&#8216;I will check what his agenda says, don&#8217;t activate the protocol, without oversight please.&#8217;<\/p><p><strong>The other girl said sternly,&nbsp;followed by a wry smile at Ally. Then she turns she walks out of the room.<\/strong><\/p><p>&#8216;Allison&#8230;.why did&nbsp;your expression change a moment ago?<br>I read differences in neural patterns, but I don&#8217;t understand.<br>Did you activate a subroutine?&#8217;<\/p><p><strong>I asked when the door closes behind her.<\/strong><\/p><\/blockquote>\n\n\n\n<p>The mention of certain words will already give some indication on the direction and genre of the story. This is a scene that I have rewritten, yet am still not too happy with. Likely you will see it in another post being rewritten again.<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>I am currently editing a story I wrote together with my friend for life Jennifer K. Garcia. The story is about a girl who is in a bad place going worse. The story evolves around an unexpected relationship that ends in a epic event. Currently the story is start to end done, but the story [&hellip;]<\/p>\n","protected":false},"author":1,"featured_media":0,"comment_status":"closed","ping_status":"open","sticky":false,"template":"","format":"standard","meta":{"_et_pb_use_builder":"","_et_pb_old_content":"","_et_gb_content_width":"","footnotes":""},"categories":[20,21],"tags":[],"class_list":["post-362","post","type-post","status-publish","format-standard","hentry","category-art","category-writing"],"_links":{"self":[{"href":"https:\/\/metawareness.com\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/posts\/362","targetHints":{"allow":["GET"]}}],"collection":[{"href":"https:\/\/metawareness.com\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/posts"}],"about":[{"href":"https:\/\/metawareness.com\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/types\/post"}],"author":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/metawareness.com\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/users\/1"}],"replies":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/metawareness.com\/index.php?rest_route=%2Fwp%2Fv2%2Fcomments&post=362"}],"version-history":[{"count":0,"href":"https:\/\/metawareness.com\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/posts\/362\/revisions"}],"wp:attachment":[{"href":"https:\/\/metawareness.com\/index.php?rest_route=%2Fwp%2Fv2%2Fmedia&parent=362"}],"wp:term":[{"taxonomy":"category","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/metawareness.com\/index.php?rest_route=%2Fwp%2Fv2%2Fcategories&post=362"},{"taxonomy":"post_tag","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/metawareness.com\/index.php?rest_route=%2Fwp%2Fv2%2Ftags&post=362"}],"curies":[{"name":"wp","href":"https:\/\/api.w.org\/{rel}","templated":true}]}}